How Not to Write a Comic: Show Don’t Tell
Monday, August 25th, 2008In the last few years, the Batman universe has been as interesting as ever. I’ve been following a lot of the books, including the current Batman and the Outsiders series, which spins off into the new Batgirl comic, by Adam Beechen, Jim Calafiore, and Mark McKenna.
Issue #1 began well enough, catching up with Batgirl in the middle of stalking two thugs and touturing them for information. We then jump to a somewhat clunky, but freshly-executed phone conversation between Alfred and Batman.
In next scene, the dialougue emphasizes the uniqueness of Cassandra Cain (Batgirl) as a character. She hardly ever speaks, letting other members of the Batman family narrate her story for her. Rather than using key action shots in a flashback to catch new readers up on Batgirl’s recent history, stacks of narration blocks and word bubbles frame iconicly posed characters, making for a few middle pages that read like a Wikipedia entry.
For the final act, Batgirl is alone again, allowing the simple, almost poetic voice that Beechen gives her to establish perfect rythym with Calafiore well chosen layouts. Ideally, this style and tone becomes that status quo for the series. It’s nice to see a character in Gotham who’s more conflicted and darker than Bruce. I look forward to spending more time with Cassandra Cain, but hope it doesn’t suffer from another Batman-narrated high-school writing assignment.

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